以不同的角度写冬天

• 作 者: 景洪春
• 机 构: 上海市徐汇区高安路第一小学,
• 出 处: 学生之友(名师导学)
• 发表日期: 2013年Z1期
• 关键词: 天气特点 匹竖 还给我 随风飘散 漫天飞舞 大树下 摇摇头 上海外国语大学 双语学校 可真

小朋友,冬天来了,不但天气变冷了,人们的生活方式也有了很多变化。我们要写冬天,怎样才能写得具体生动呢?怎样写又能不落俗套呢?我觉得,有两点非常重要,首先就是要抓住天气特点进行细致观察,从不同角度来写,比如:风、雪、雨、气温等等。第二,要抓住人们容易忽视的人、事、物来表现冬天的特点,可以采用侧面描写,这样写更有新意,有深度,能写出多样的冬天。下面的例文中,同学们写的冬天各有特色。朱奕澄同学这篇

Children, winter is coming, not only the weather is getting cold, people’s life style has also changed a lot. How can we write vividly? How to write yet unconventional? I think there are two very important, first of all, we must take the weather characteristics carefully observed from different angles to write, such as: Wind, snow, rain, temperature and more. Second, we must grasp people’s, things and things that are easily overlooked by people to represent the characteristics of winter. We can use lateral descriptions to write new ideas and depths so that we can write a variety of winters. In the following example, students write their own unique winter features. Zhu Yicheng students this