怎样观察和描写景物

• 作 者: 林淑芳 单守英
• 出 处: 少年天地
• 发表日期: 2004年期
• 关键词: 色彩特征 身临其境之感 使人 颜色特征 顺序观察 不知道 动态美

一、观察要抓重点什么是重点呢?简单地说,就是这个景物所具有的独特的地方。比如,“芦花开的时候,远远望去,黄绿的芦苇上好像盖了一层厚厚的白雪。风一吹,鹅毛般的苇絮就飘飘悠悠地飞起来,把几十家小房屋都罩在柔软的芦花里。”这段话,作者抓住了“黄绿”“白雪”,写出了景物的色彩特征;用“厚厚”“柔软”写出了景物的质感特征。这样写就为我们描绘了一幅立体的图画,使人产生身临其境之感。

First, the observation should focus on what is the point? In short, is the unique place that this scene has. For example, “when the aloe bloom, from afar, yellow-green reeds seem to cover a thick layer of snow.While the wind blows, the goose-like reed fluttering fluttering leisurely fly up to the dozens of small The houses are all covered in soft aloe. ”In this passage, the author grasps“ yellow-green ”and“ snowy ”and writes out the color features of the scene; the texture features of the scene are written in“ thick ”and“ soft ”. This writing portrays a three-dimensional picture of us, giving us a sense of immersiveness.