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辅导点拨作者对自己的介绍是全面的,从外貌到内心,从学习到生活;同时又是有重点的,重在写自己的个性与追求。文中人物形象描写丰满、真实,正面与侧面描写相结合,具体可感,富于生活气息。中等的个儿,圆圆的脸,浓浓的眉毛下长着一双不大却聚光的眼睛,一笑就露出一排整齐的牙齿,充满了对生活的热爱,这就是我——伊宁市第二十三小学的一名男生殷浩天。我是一个“小书迷”。有时,我还没写完作业就会不由自主地翻开一本书看,常常作业做到12点,为此妈妈可没少唠叨我。但现
Counseling and authoritative introduction of the author is comprehensive, from the appearance to the heart, from learning to life; at the same time there is a focus, focusing on writing their own personality and the pursuit. Character description of the article fullness, true, positive and side description of the combination of specific sense, full of life flavor. Medium, round face, under the thick eyebrows with a pair of small but concentrated eyes, a smile to reveal a neat row of teeth, full of love of life, this is me - Yining City Twenty-three primary school boy Yin Haotian. I am a “little fan of books.” Sometimes I can not help but open a book before I finish my homework. I often do homework for 12 o’clock. But now