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作文评语的写作是中小学语文教师写作中的重要内容。一篇作文评语,虽然字数不多,但可以看出教师的鉴赏能力和写作能力,也可以反映出教师的教育理念与思想感情。对一篇学生习作的评价,可以仁者见仁,智者见智,但这并不是说想怎么写就怎么写,更不是说可以随便应付。作文评语写作有它的特殊性。这个特殊性就是它既要根据学生的思想实际和写作水平,又要考虑教学的目标,更要考虑兴趣的培养。一篇好的作文评语,要力求具备这样几个要素:发现独特的亮点,并给予充分肯定;指明其存在的不足,让学生清楚;提出修改的具体意见,让其知道怎样修改可以
The writing of composition reviews is an important part of the writing of Chinese language teachers in primary and secondary schools. An essay comment, although the number of words is not large, but can see the teacher’s appreciation ability and writing ability, can also reflect the teacher’s educational philosophy and thoughts and feelings. The evaluation of a student’s work can be seen by the benevolent, the wise see wisdom, but this is not to say how to write on how to write, let alone to deal with it. Composition writing has its particularity. This particularity means that it should not only consider the students’ actual thinking and writing level, but also consider the teaching goals, and must also consider the cultivation of interest. A good essay comment should strive to have such a few elements: to discover unique bright spots and give full affirmation; to point out its shortcomings, to make students clear; to put forward specific comments on modifications so that they know how to modify