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同学少年您为同学们树立的好作文的标准是什么?讲评作文时,我会先让同学们有感情地把自己写的文章读一遍。读后,我常常会问两个问题:“有谁被自己的文章感动了?”“有谁被自己的思想触动了?”连自己都无法感动或触动的文章,无论文辞如何,都难称佳作。同学少年不能被自己的文章感动,是否意味着同学们对自己的生活、认识、情感和思想等缺乏一种敏感?举个例子吧。讲读古典诗词时,诗文中有很多写月的句子,如“一夜飞度镜湖月”、“月满西楼”、“杨柳岸晓风残月”等,写出了文人们浪漫的情怀、柔柔的相思、浓郁的别情或酸楚的心志,同学们也非常喜欢。于是,我就让他们以“月亮”为话题写一篇作文。三天后,作文交上来了,内容大多是罗
What are the criteria for a good essay for your classmates to establish a good essay for your classmates? When commenting on a essay, I will let the students have the feeling to read the essay they wrote. After reading, I often ask two questions: “Who is touched by his own article? ” “Who is touched by his own thoughts?” Even the articles that can not be touched or touched by oneself, no matter how , Are hard to say good work. Whether classmates and teenagers can not be moved by their own articles means that they are not sensitive to their own life, knowledge, feelings and thoughts. For example, Speaking of classical poetry, there are many written in the poetry of the sentence, such as “a night on the Mirror Lake”, “full West Building ”, “willow shore Xiaofeng moon”, wrote Literary people romantic feelings, soft acacia, rich farewell or sour mind, the students also like it very much. So I asked them to write an essay on the topic “Moon”. Three days later, the composition handed in, the content is mostly Luo