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这次我们选用了两篇优秀来稿,可以说各有所长,难分轩轾。王太一同学写得清新可爱、童趣盎然,尤其是小红嘴雀们七嘴八舌地嚷嚷所道出的话——每一个接受过帮助的人,只要他还怀有一颗天真质朴的童心,都会有这样的感觉吧。而永悦同学把这个故事置于圣诞节的背景之下,让故事有了一种温馨浪漫的气息。另外,文章用丰富的想象丰满了情节,体现了创作色彩。发稿/赵小珏在一个晴朗的日子里,农夫提着斧子来到一棵大树下,他想用这棵树为自己做一张舒适的床。他举起斧子砍啊砍,不一会儿就在树上砍出了一个大口子。树已经快被砍倒
This time we selected two excellent contributions, we can say that each has its own strengths, Difficult to distinguish Xuanliao. Wang Taidi students write fresh and lovely, childlike, especially the little red sparrows shouting rumored words - every one who has received help, as long as he also cherished a naive and innocent childlike innocence, Will have this feeling. And Yong Yue students put this story under the background of Christmas, so that the story has a warm and romantic atmosphere. In addition, the article enriched the plot with a rich imagination, reflecting the creative color. On a clear day, the farmer carried an ax to a big tree, and he wanted to use it to make a comfortable bed for himself. He lifted the ax and cut it, and in a moment he cut a big hole in the tree. The tree has been cut down quickly