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作文教学是小学语文教学当中的重点难点,教师难教,学生怕写。因此,小学生作文存在着一个“空”、“呆”和“硬”等多个方面的毛病,一是内容会出现空洞无物,学生在写作文的时候会出现套话、旧话和空话,甚至是写了很多没有把自己想要写的东西写出来,比如针对人物的描写,大多数都是写:脸是圆圆的,大眼睛、浓浓的眉毛、乌黑的头发和大眼睛等之类的话语,所以更加不会用非常逼真形像的词语去描写自己想要描写的人物。文字相对苍白呆滞,不会运用修辞的手法去增加句子的可读性,学生只会用干巴巴的句子写出来,更不会发挥自己发挥自己想要发挥的想象,导致对事物无法正确和生动地描写,使文章读起来更加具有吸引力和感染力。
Composition teaching is one of the key difficulties in Chinese teaching in primary schools. Teachers are hard to teach and students are afraid to write. Therefore, the composition of primary school students has many shortcomings such as “null ”, “stay ” and “hard ”. The first is that the content will be empty and the students will have the old saying Words and empty talk, or even write a lot of things they did not write you want to write out, such as description of the characters, most of them are written: the face is round, big eyes, thick eyebrows, dark hair and Big eyes and the like, so they will not even describe the characters they want to describe in very vivid images. The text is relatively dull and will not use rhetorical techniques to increase the readability of sentences. Students will only write in dry sentences, but will not give play to their own imagination that they want to play, resulting in things that are not correct and vivid To describe, make the article read more attractive and contagious.