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很多同学写的记叙文存在着一个通病:内容不具体,文章语句也通顺,结构也完整,甚至于说文中还不乏华丽的词句,但就是一读起来就觉得枯燥乏味,很难触动读者的心弦。究其原因,是记叙文中没有具体的人物、事件,只是像记流水账似的把所写的内容一一罗列出来,缺乏感人的力量。记叙文所以写不具体,总的说来有如下几个原因:一是观察不细致。二是不会运用多种的描写方法。三是没有把握记叙文写具体的方法。那么记叙文怎样写才具体呢?首先,在谈怎样写之前要了解什么叫“具体”。记叙文的具体就是指:写人要使人如见其人,如闻其声;写景要令人如临其境;叙事要让人感同身受。换句话说,写人要把人物描绘得生动形象,叙事要清楚明白,
Many narratives written by classmates have a common problem: the content is not specific, the sentences are also fluent, the structure is complete, and even the text is full of gorgeous phrases, but it is boring to read on the first reading, it is difficult to touch the reader’s heart. The reason is that there is no specific person or event in the narrative. It is just like a streamlined account that lists all the contents of writing and lacks touching power. Narrative writing is not specific. Generally speaking, there are several reasons for this: First, observation is not detailed. The second is not to use a variety of description methods. Third, there is no certainty in narrative writing. Then, how do you write narratives before they are written? First, before you talk about how to write, you need to understand what is meant by “specificity.” The narrative specifically refers to: writers want to make people look at their people, such as hearing their voices; write scenes to make people feel like they are in the same place; narratives make people feel empathy. In other words, the writer must depict the characters vividly and the narration should be clear.