千淘万漉虽辛苦吹尽狂沙始到金——从生活中提取有价值的写作素材

• 作 者: 陈玉剑 吕龙
• 机 构: 大丰市实验初级中学,
• 出 处: 初中生世界
• 发表日期: 2014年26期
• 关键词: 提取 有价值 写作 取暖 热水袋 巡诊 寒冷 冬天

【习作巡诊】取暖苏杨夜,一如既往的寂静、寒冷刺骨……小时候,我怕黑,妈妈总是在床边陪伴我,直到我入睡才离开。夜晚是很冷的,尤其是在冬天。每天晚上,刚钻进冰凉的被窝,我的身子总是冷的,因此睡觉前,妈妈总是先用热水袋焐暖自己的身子,然后钻进我的被窝,给我取暖。那时候,我总以为,妈妈的身子是天生的暖和,妈妈给我取暖是天经地义的。可后来我才知道,妈妈她自己也怕冷,她给我取暖的时候,总是后背露在外面,用她前身的余热给我取暖。暖

[Study tour] Su Yang Yang night, as always, silence, cold ... ... a child, I’m afraid of black, my mother always accompanied me at the bed, until I fell asleep before leaving. The night is very cold, especially in winter. Every night, just got into the cold blanket, my body is always cold, so before going to bed, my mother always warm your body with a hot water bottle, and then drill into my bed, give me warm. At that time, I always thought that my mother’s body was born warm and it was perfectly justifiable for my mother to warm me up. But later I learned that my mother was afraid of her cold, when she was giving me warm, always exposed back outside, with my predecessor, the heat left me warm. warm