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学生作文如何克服公式化、概念化的毛病,我的体会是,鼓励学生写真情实感。同学们来自白云飞飘的九嶷山区,那里有美丽动人的神话传说,更有神话般的火热现实。他们看到了今日农村发生的深刻变化,感到了农村脉膊的跳动。平日谈话里,也掩饰不住对新生活的喜悦,洋溢着对幸福的欢笑。一次,我以《春风吹绿九嶷山》为总题(各人的题目可根据题材自定),让学生作文,满足了同学们讴歌新生活的热望。
How to overcome the problem of formulaic and conceptualization of student essay? My experience is to encourage students to take real picture. Students from Baiyun flying Giufang Mountain, where there are beautiful and moving myths and legends, more fabulous fiery reality. They saw the profound changes that took place in the countryside today and felt the pulse of the countryside. Weekday conversation, but also could not conceal the joy of a new life, filled with laughter of happiness. Once, I took “spring breeze green Jiuyishan” as the total topic (each subject can be customized according to the subject matter), let the students essay, to meet the students Acura new life desire.