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好些孩子到中高段(四五六年级)还只会写“流水账”。比如:“今天,我到表弟家,和表弟一起玩。我们一起看电视,玩游戏,后来我就回家了。”……这是名副其实的“真话”作文,但真而无聊,读来没劲。究其原因,至关重要的一点就是:小作者没有属于自己的独一无二的观察、体验以及内心感受,无论什么都只是“一阵风飘过,不留半点痕迹”。《语文课程标准》在中低年级(二三年级)的写话要求里提出:“对写话有兴趣,留心周围事物”“观察周围世界,能不拘形式地写下自己的见闻、感受和想象,注意把自己觉得新奇有趣或印象最深、最受感动的内容写清楚”……为此,在中低年级,我们可引导孩子们睁大眼睛,
Some children to high (466 grade) will only write “running account ”. For example: “Today, I went to my cousin and played with my cousin. We watched TV and played games together, and then I came home.” “This is a veritable” truth “composition, but Really boring, read boring. The reason, it is crucially important: the little author does not have his own unique observation, experience and inner feelings, no matter what is just ”a gust of wind drifted away without leaving a trace.“ ”The standard of Chinese Curriculum“ is put forward in the writing requirements of middle and lower grades (Grade Two and Three): ”I am interested in writing and are concerned about things around.“ I can observe the world around me and write down my own thoughts informally. Feelings and imagination, pay attention to the novelty of their own interesting or most memorable, the most moving content clearly written ”... ... Therefore, in the lower grades, we can guide children open their eyes,