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摘 要:教师应有选择地挖掘阅读素材,指导学生参照一些范文,适时地进行对应的同类体裁的写作练习,让学生归纳各种不同的表达方式,选择易于记忆、可供使用的句型和用语,运用到英语写作中。
关键词:阅读素材;英语写作;写作指导
中国分类号:G424 文献标识码:A文章编号:1992-7711(2010)4-033 -01
教材中的每篇文章都是经过了精心挑选,所以我们可以因地制宜,适时地锻炼学生对各种题材文章的写作能力。但除此以外,我们也可尝试对平时习题中所接触到的阅读素材加以挖掘,找出其文本独特性,为学生所用,造就学生作文的闪亮点。
作文材料:
假如你的朋友李明应邀去参加美国朋友的生日宴会,他不懂如何应付,请你给他一些建议,告诉他如何去做以便给人留下好印象。根据以下提示写一篇150词左右的短文。
1. 礼品(一瓶酒或一盒巧克力);
2. 准时到达,可提前十分钟左右;
3. 称赞主人的饭菜;
4. 饭后不要逗留太长时间;
5. 走前再次感谢主人。
开头明确主题,然后分列出各点建议是建议类文章的套路,因为这样能使行文流畅,脉络清晰。但是如果只是以“I’d like to give you some advice on…” 这样的句型引出又使文章太显单调。所以,不妨来模仿以下几篇阅读素材中的首段:
素材一:Ways of protecting animals
Many animals lovers would like to do more to help animals, but aren’t sure where to start or feel like they just don’t have the time. The good news is that there are many simple things you can do to help protect animals.
该段尾句没有特别难的词汇,但是表语从句和定语从句的运用使整个句子显得很饱满,对于想用复杂句但是一下笔便错误不断,需要用语言表达时就感到力不从心的学生来说,是个不错的借鉴。因此,模仿一下:
It is a new experience for you to be invited to an American dinner party, and you may be at a loss how to deal with it. The good news is that there are many simple things you can do to make a good impression at the dinner party,
素材二: How to overcome your fear of tests
At some point or another in their school life, students develop a fear of tests. It’s not because tests are something to be afraid of. Most students are afraid of tests mainly because they don’t always think that they are prepared for tests. Fortunately, overcoming your fear of tests is not difficult as long as you stick to the tips below.
模仿后文章开头可以为:
As it is the first time that you have been invited to an American dinner party, you are likely to have a fear of going there. Fortunately, overcoming your fear of going to the party is not difficult as long as you stick to the tips below.
尾句用动名词做主语,同时词组stick to和as long as也能展示出学生可将一些基本词组在作文中运用自如,开头就让阅卷老师耳目一新,作文得分自然也不会低。
素材三:8 ways to make your business environmentally friendly
Operating a green business is not only good for the environment but also good for your business’s bottom line because conserving resources and cutting down on waste saves money. Here are some ideas for running a green business that you can put into practice.
Here are some…的句型在建议类文章中虽很常见,但是其后的定语从句和词组put …into practice倒是很值得推崇。因此,可以在首段给出:
Being invited to an American dinner party is not only a new experience for you but also gives you a good chance to learn more about American culture. Here are some ideas for going to the party that you can put into practice.
素材四: The importance of family
It is not difficult to show the importance of family. When you were a baby, your parents didn’t change your wet nappies only to stop you crying, but also because you felt uncomfortable. I think, this one single example is enough to make you understand the great love that you get from your family. If it isn’t, then let me know --- I have an endless list of examples which I could draw on.
有些学生词汇贫乏,懒于思索,反来复去用老是那么几句话,显得词穷语尽,文章空话连篇,苍白无力。因此,模仿是他们通往成功作文的必经之路。模仿之后,我们可以这样写:
It is an unforgettable experience for you to be invited to an American dinner party for the first time. Chances are that you will not have enough confidence to feel at ease at the party. If so, then let me know - I have a list of suggestions which you could follow.
不难看出,在以上的范文中,不仅是尾句采用了模仿,前面的句子也在句子结构和选词上参照了给出的素材。这一类型的仿写有助于训练学生的写作思维,促使学生逐步掌握谋篇布局、斟酌语句的策略与方法。恰当合理的模仿式运用能使学生的习作增色不少,对于迅速提高学生的英文写作水平,帮助极大。通过模仿阅读素材,一些好的句子在学生心中生根发芽,学生就会很自然地模仿这样的句子进行写作。先模仿,后创造性地发挥,让学生在模仿的过程中不断完善,提升自我,假以时日,学生就会写出语法正确,句意通顺,结构严谨规范的英语作文。
因此,在具体的教学中,老师应有选择地挖掘阅读素材,指导学生参照一些范文。当然,光积累素材也是不够的,要适时地进行对应的同类体裁的写作练习,可以采用以上“一文多译”的方法,让学生归纳各种不同的表达方式,然后选择自己易于记忆、可供使用的句型和用语,运用到自己的习作中。让学生在不断的实践中品尝成功的喜悦,激发他们写作的兴趣。
关键词:阅读素材;英语写作;写作指导
中国分类号:G424 文献标识码:A文章编号:1992-7711(2010)4-033 -01
教材中的每篇文章都是经过了精心挑选,所以我们可以因地制宜,适时地锻炼学生对各种题材文章的写作能力。但除此以外,我们也可尝试对平时习题中所接触到的阅读素材加以挖掘,找出其文本独特性,为学生所用,造就学生作文的闪亮点。
作文材料:
假如你的朋友李明应邀去参加美国朋友的生日宴会,他不懂如何应付,请你给他一些建议,告诉他如何去做以便给人留下好印象。根据以下提示写一篇150词左右的短文。
1. 礼品(一瓶酒或一盒巧克力);
2. 准时到达,可提前十分钟左右;
3. 称赞主人的饭菜;
4. 饭后不要逗留太长时间;
5. 走前再次感谢主人。
开头明确主题,然后分列出各点建议是建议类文章的套路,因为这样能使行文流畅,脉络清晰。但是如果只是以“I’d like to give you some advice on…” 这样的句型引出又使文章太显单调。所以,不妨来模仿以下几篇阅读素材中的首段:
素材一:Ways of protecting animals
Many animals lovers would like to do more to help animals, but aren’t sure where to start or feel like they just don’t have the time. The good news is that there are many simple things you can do to help protect animals.
该段尾句没有特别难的词汇,但是表语从句和定语从句的运用使整个句子显得很饱满,对于想用复杂句但是一下笔便错误不断,需要用语言表达时就感到力不从心的学生来说,是个不错的借鉴。因此,模仿一下:
It is a new experience for you to be invited to an American dinner party, and you may be at a loss how to deal with it. The good news is that there are many simple things you can do to make a good impression at the dinner party,
素材二: How to overcome your fear of tests
At some point or another in their school life, students develop a fear of tests. It’s not because tests are something to be afraid of. Most students are afraid of tests mainly because they don’t always think that they are prepared for tests. Fortunately, overcoming your fear of tests is not difficult as long as you stick to the tips below.
模仿后文章开头可以为:
As it is the first time that you have been invited to an American dinner party, you are likely to have a fear of going there. Fortunately, overcoming your fear of going to the party is not difficult as long as you stick to the tips below.
尾句用动名词做主语,同时词组stick to和as long as也能展示出学生可将一些基本词组在作文中运用自如,开头就让阅卷老师耳目一新,作文得分自然也不会低。
素材三:8 ways to make your business environmentally friendly
Operating a green business is not only good for the environment but also good for your business’s bottom line because conserving resources and cutting down on waste saves money. Here are some ideas for running a green business that you can put into practice.
Here are some…的句型在建议类文章中虽很常见,但是其后的定语从句和词组put …into practice倒是很值得推崇。因此,可以在首段给出:
Being invited to an American dinner party is not only a new experience for you but also gives you a good chance to learn more about American culture. Here are some ideas for going to the party that you can put into practice.
素材四: The importance of family
It is not difficult to show the importance of family. When you were a baby, your parents didn’t change your wet nappies only to stop you crying, but also because you felt uncomfortable. I think, this one single example is enough to make you understand the great love that you get from your family. If it isn’t, then let me know --- I have an endless list of examples which I could draw on.
有些学生词汇贫乏,懒于思索,反来复去用老是那么几句话,显得词穷语尽,文章空话连篇,苍白无力。因此,模仿是他们通往成功作文的必经之路。模仿之后,我们可以这样写:
It is an unforgettable experience for you to be invited to an American dinner party for the first time. Chances are that you will not have enough confidence to feel at ease at the party. If so, then let me know - I have a list of suggestions which you could follow.
不难看出,在以上的范文中,不仅是尾句采用了模仿,前面的句子也在句子结构和选词上参照了给出的素材。这一类型的仿写有助于训练学生的写作思维,促使学生逐步掌握谋篇布局、斟酌语句的策略与方法。恰当合理的模仿式运用能使学生的习作增色不少,对于迅速提高学生的英文写作水平,帮助极大。通过模仿阅读素材,一些好的句子在学生心中生根发芽,学生就会很自然地模仿这样的句子进行写作。先模仿,后创造性地发挥,让学生在模仿的过程中不断完善,提升自我,假以时日,学生就会写出语法正确,句意通顺,结构严谨规范的英语作文。
因此,在具体的教学中,老师应有选择地挖掘阅读素材,指导学生参照一些范文。当然,光积累素材也是不够的,要适时地进行对应的同类体裁的写作练习,可以采用以上“一文多译”的方法,让学生归纳各种不同的表达方式,然后选择自己易于记忆、可供使用的句型和用语,运用到自己的习作中。让学生在不断的实践中品尝成功的喜悦,激发他们写作的兴趣。