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一对学生的思想认识和阅读表达都有启发的写景的好教材,近几年逐渐多了一些。新选入初中第一册的《海滨仲夏夜》就是其中之一。它通篇没有使用一个政治术语,也没有“景”外生枝的赘笔,但处处蕴含着热爱生活的深厚感情。课文写的是海滨城市——威海的夏夜景色,虽是夜景,色彩却鲜艳明亮,它把没有生命的晚霞、星光、灯火以及海水、海风写得充满活力;虽是写威海的安静,却使人感到这里的一切都孕育着无限生机。《海滨仲夏夜》的写景真切,语言朴实,比某些写景的陈词滥调,它确实给我们耳目一新的感觉。
A pair of students’ ideological knowledge and reading expressions have inspiring good teaching materials. In recent years, there have been more and more. The “Mid-Season Midsummer Night” newly selected in the first book of junior high school is one of them. It does not use a political term throughout, nor does it have the sly pen of the “outside” of the “King”, but it always contains deep feelings of love for life. The text is written on the summer night in Weihai, a seaside city. Even though it is a night scene, the colors are bright and bright. It writes lifeless sunsets, stars, lights, sea water, and sea breeze. Even though it is written in quiet Weihai, It makes people feel that everything here is born with infinite vitality. “A Midsummer Night in the Seashore” has a real scene and plain language. Compared with some clichés of writing scenes, it really gives us a fresh feeling.