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[作文指导] 题目精析:这次作文要求写人与动物之间发生的事,而且要把动物想像成人,也就是把动物拟人化,直接当作人来写,是一个童话故事。题中提供了两个中心:一个是歌颂人与动物互相帮助,和睦相处;另一个是批评人对野生动物的伤害。题目自拟。重点指导:编这个童话故事之前,同学们有必要查阅收集一些有关野生动物的资料,对一些野生动物的习性、数量、生存环境等有所了解,然后选择一种动物编一个故事。一般来说,这种动物的生存环境好的,就选取“歌颂”的角度去构思;这种动物的生存环境很差的,比如濒临灭绝的动物,就应该选取“批评”的角度去构思。
[Composition Guide] Subject analysis: The composition required to write something between people and animals, but also to think of animals as adults, that is, the animal anthropomorphic, directly as a person to write, is a fairy tale. The title provides two centers: one is to praise people and animals to help each other and live in harmony; the other is to criticize people for their damage to wildlife. Topic self-made. Important guidance: Before compiling this fairy tale, it is necessary for students to refer to collect some information about wildlife, learn some habits, quantity, living environment of some wild animals, and then select an animal to make a story. Generally speaking, the living environment of this kind of animal is good, and the concept of “praising” is selected. The living environment of this animal is very poor. For example, the endangered animal should be conceived in terms of “criticism.”