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初涉教坛,我有幸教学老舍先生的《在烈日和暴雨下》(节选自《骆驼祥子》)。本文虽然只是节选部分,但足可一斑窥豹,我们可从中领略到一代大家大手笔的风采。无论是贯穿全文的以景写人,以人写景的手法,还是动词、叠词的准确运用,都令人叹为观止。然而正如太阳也有黑子,名家名篇也难免有不尽人意之处。 课文的第二自然段精雕细刻地描写天气的火热。其中,有这样一句:“那些拉着买卖的,即使是最漂亮的小伙子,也居然敢于丢脸,不敢再跑,只低着头慢慢地走。”当第一次通读全文时,对此处“漂亮”一词,我就略感有些拗口。后来经过学习全篇,我这种感受更为强烈了。针对
At the beginning of the teaching career, I had the privilege of teaching Mr. Lao She’s “In the Burning Sun and Rainstorms” (excluded from “The Camel Xiang Zi”). Although this article is only an excerpt, it can be a glimpse of leopard. From this we can appreciate the elegance of a generation of people. Whether it is a person who writes through landscapes through the whole story, the way people use scenes to write scenes, or the precise use of verbs and reduplicated words, is amazing. However, just as the sun also has sunspots, famous masterpieces are inevitably unsatisfactory. The second paragraph of the text describes the fiery weather. Among them, there is such a sentence: “Those who bought and bought, even the most beautiful young man, dared to lose face and dared not run again, just head down slowly.” When reading the full text for the first time, At the word “beautiful,” I was a little bit embarrassed. Later, after studying the whole chapter, my feelings were even stronger. against