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《那片绿绿的爬山虎》(人教版四上)教学片段——师:叶老曾经说过,所谓好文章,只不过是选材精当一点儿,用词准确一点儿,话说得周密一点儿罢了。仔细看看叶老先生的圈画,你还看到了什么?生:(读)有一处,我记得十分清楚……感受到他的认真、平和以及温暖,如春风拂面。师:看,“我”的原句是——(课件出示:怎么你把包几何课本的书皮去掉了呢?)师:叶老改成了——(课件出示:怎么你把几何课本的包书纸去掉了呢?)师:你们注意到了吗?这句话上面有两个红色的修改符
“The patch of green ivy” (PEP 4) Teaching fragment - Teacher: Ye Lao once said that the so-called good article is only a little bit more precise selection of materials, the words are a bit accurate and the words are a bit finer . A careful look at Mr. Ye Lao’s circle painting, what else do you see? Student: (read) There is a place, I remember very clearly ... feel his serious, gentle and warm, such as the spring breeze. Teacher: Look, “I ” the original sentence is - (courseware to show: how do you remove the bag geometry textbook cover it?) Teacher: Ye old changed - (courseware show: how do you put the geometry textbook The book paper removed?) Teacher: Did you notice it? This sentence above has two red modifier