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选发在这里的三篇《和为贵》,故事都很新颖,不落窠臼,出人意外,读完给人耳目一新的感觉。雷乐昊同学的文章很有意思,朋友顺子因为鼻炎打喷嚏遭自己嫌弃,不料自己也因感冒咳嗽遭同学遗弃,顺子却留下来照顾自己,情节转换自然,结构巧妙,在前后的对比中,显现出朋友间真诚的可贵,真实感人,判95分;孙佳雨同学的文章,以我与奶奶的误解为主线,直
Elected here in the three “peace is expensive,” the story is very novel, not losing ground, surprisingly, giving people a fresh feeling. Lei Lehao students article is very interesting, friends straight son because of rhinitis sneezed by their own disdain, unexpectedly because of cold and cough was abandoned by students, but straight to stay and take care of themselves, the plot is converted naturally, the structure is clever in contrast before and after , Showing a sincere and valuable friends, true touching, sentenced to 95 points; Sun Jiayu students articles, with my grandma’s misunderstanding as the main line, straight