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暑假期间,很多同学有机会探访名胜古迹或游览美丽的湖光山色。回来后,如果能把这些经历写成游记,让美好的印象留下来该多好啊!那么,怎样写好这类游记呢?下面是一位同学写的《游醉白池》中的一段:……穿过九曲长廊,我们便到了“醉白池”边。啊!这儿可真美!一潭墨绿色的池水,波光粼粼。远处几片淡绿色的浮萍,就像叶叶小舟。“荷花,荷花!”我顺着妈妈手指的方向看去,见那边池中红、白、粉各色荷花仰着笑脸。她们像一群刚从水中浮出的美人,在轻风吹拂下,舞动着
During summer vacation, many students have the opportunity to visit places of interest or visit beautiful lakes and mountains. After returning, if you can write these experiences as a travelogue, let a good impression of how good it is left! Then, how to write such a travelogue? Here is a paragraph written by a classmate, “a cruel white pool”: ... ... Through the nine promenade, we have to “drunk white pool” side. Ah! It is beautiful here! A pool of dark green water, sparkling. A few light green duckweed in the distance, like a leaf boat. “Lotus, lotus!” I looked down the direction of the mother finger, see the pool in the red, white, pink lotus lotus smile. Like a group of beautiful women who just emerged from the water, they danced in the breeze