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改写《木兰诗》将《木兰诗》改写成一篇故事,有关戏曲、动画片等改编作品可以作为参考。题目自拟,字数不限。写作时注意下列几点: 1.故事和人物形象基本符合原作。2.有些情节,如木兰的军旅生活,可以依据原作想象、发挥,写得更详细具体一些。3.语言尽可能明快、生动。(语文社版) 提示:根据题目的要求,“故事和人物形象基本符合原作”,我们首先要理解原作的内容,把握原诗的人物形象、主题思想和主要情节。在行文上,要以“木兰是女郎”来构思故事,紧紧围绕木兰的形象特点逐层展开。在情节安排上,要做到详略得当。木兰代父出征、军旅生活、获胜辞赏、归家团聚可详写,其他可略写。这样处理,不仅能使行文疏密有致,更是刻画人物的需要。这是一篇写人的记叙文,要在原作的基础上,着重刻画人物。原作着墨较多的是生活场景和儿女情态,在表现这些内容的时候。可在原作的基础上,借助想象合理发挥,适当补充细节充实内容,让所写的内容充满生活气息,也可参考有关戏曲、动画片等改编作品,把文章写得更具体生动。这些细节没有脱离原作,却是对原作的必要补充,这样处理, 会使木兰的形象更丰满,木兰代父从军、保家卫国的崇高精神境界也会更加鲜明。有两点需要注意:一是改写时可不按原诗的写作顺序,事件的发展和结果也可不依原诗,甚至可以补充一些人物和情节,力求写出新意。二是改写一定要用自己的语言,切忌对照原文直译,要求用自己的语言进行叙述和描写,语言尽可能明快、生动。(余俊)
Rewriting “Mulan Shi” rewrites “Mulan Shi” into a story. Relevant works such as operas and cartoons can be used as references. Questions are self-made and the number of words is not limited. Note the following points when writing: 1. The story and character are basically in line with the original. 2. Some plots, such as Magnolia’s military life, can be based on the original imagination, play, write more detailed and specific. 3. The language is as bright and vivid as possible. (Chinese version) Tip: According to the requirements of the title, “story and character images are basically in line with the original.” We must first understand the contents of the original works, and grasp the characters, themes, and main plots of the original poems. In terms of writing, it is necessary to conceive the story with “Magnolia is a girl”, and to closely follow the image of Mulan. In the plot arrangement, we must do a detailed job. Magnolia’s father-in-law, military life, winning speeches and reunions can be written in detail. Others can be abbreviated. In this way, not only can the writing be done densely, but it is also the need to portray characters. This is a narrative written by the author. He must emphasize the characters on the basis of the original works. The original ink is more of a life scene and the genre of the children, when these contents are expressed. Can be based on the original work, with the help of imagination and reasonable play, appropriate to supplement the details and enrich the content, so that the contents of the written life full of life, you can also refer to the relevant opera, animation and other adaptation works, write the article more specific vivid. These details did not deviate from the original, but they are necessary supplements to the original work. By doing so, Mulan’s image will be more full, and the noble spiritual realm of Mulan acting on behalf of the father to protect the country and defending the country will be even more distinct. There are two points that need attention: First, the writing order of the original poems may not be changed. The development and results of the events may also be based on the original poems. It may even supplement some characters and plots and strive to write new ideas. The second is that rewriting must be done in your own language, and you should not use direct translation from the original text. You need to use your own language for narration and description. The language should be as clear and vivid as possible. (Yu Jun)