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失误原因:偏离主题题目:我属于那儿一考生家,是每一个人心的归宿,而在每一个中国人心中,家里的三餐一定是最美味的。我拥有一个幸福的童年,父亲的选料,母亲的手艺使我的童年充满了家的味道。一碗清水挂面撒上一些葱花,一盆番茄炒蛋配上一碗米饭,是我心中幸福的回忆。轻轻推开家门,看着洗菜的父亲和和面的母亲,我马上明白了什么,洗了个手,静静
Reasons for the error: Deviation from the subject topic: I belong to a test taker there, is the destination of each and every one of the hearts of the Chinese people, the three meals at home must be the most delicious. I have a happy childhood, my father’s choice, my mother’s craft so that my childhood full of home flavor. A bowl of water noodles sprinkled with some green onions, a pot of tomato scrambled eggs accompanied by a bowl of rice, is my heart a happy memory. Gently open the door, watching the washing of the father and mother, I immediately understand what, washed his hands, quiet