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写文章要做到具体、形象,除了要细致观察周围的事物,还要多问几个“是怎么样的”。有一个同学写了一篇《夜访同学家》的文章,其中一段写他黑夜去邻村同学家。路上心里怎么害怕,又是怎样战胜害怕的内容。起先他是这样写的:“天很黑很黑,我害怕极了。可是我想到自己对同学做的保证,就鼓起勇气,坚持走到了同学的家。”老师告诉他,文章写得空洞,得好好修改、充实。方法就是多问自己几个到底是怎样的,他
Write articles to be specific, image, in addition to careful observation of the surrounding things, but also ask how many “is what kind of ”. One of my classmates wrote an essay entitled “Night-Visitors ’Home”, one of which was written in the dark for his neighbors’ hometown. How fear on the road, but also how to overcome the fear of content. At first, he wrote: “The sky was dark and black, and I was terrified, but I thought of my assurance to my classmates, and courageously persisted in reaching my classmates’ home.” "The teacher told him that the article was written To be hollow, it must be well revised and fulfilled. The way is to ask yourself what exactly is a few, he