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点评这幅手机摄影作品很明确地把最大面积让给了要表现的主体——云,形态抓得非常好,黑云滚滚,丰富的明暗对比和线条变化展现出云的层次和深度。相对于天空的曲线,地面更多的是平直线条,车辆也稳稳行驶,不仅点缀充实了画面、更暗示了安定的内心感受。稍显不足的是,地面彭调过暗,汽车没有亮灯,缺乏一些吸引人的小亮点;构图上,面包车左侧的空间仍显狡窄,平衡方面略显不足。
Comments This mobile phone photography clearly gives the largest area to the subject to be represented - the cloud grasps very well, the dark clouds billow, the rich light-dark contrast and the line changes show the cloud level and depth. Relative to the curve of the sky, the ground is more straight lines, the vehicle is also driving steadily, not only embellished enrich the screen, but also hinted at the stability of the inner feelings. Slightly inadequate is that the ground Peng too dark, the car did not light, the lack of some attractive little bright spots; composition, the left side of the van is still cunning space, the balance is slightly less than adequate.