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为学生写评语是当班主任老师的必修课,如果写传统式的评语,很刻板,没有亲切感。如何让评语生动起来呢?近日,我为书法班的同学们写了一些评语,摘录一些如下:A:喜欢你的文静,喜欢你的勤奋,更喜欢你的好学,于是你的书法就有了灵气,翻转腾挪,抑扬顿挫,似天马行空,犹如水银泻地,让人怎不着迷?B:一笔一画,你写得是如此遒劲有力,于是,毛笔在你的手中,便有了不可抗拒的魅力,横竖撇捺点,在欢快的舞蹈;篆隶楷行草,在纸上欢笑,享受吧,这艺术的瑰宝。C:不管外面有多嘈杂,你总是能够静静地,临着帖,不急不躁,似一泓清水,倒影着湖光山色,多美的一幅图画啊。D:可爱的你,一笔一画书写着中华民族的优秀传统文化,书法在你的笔下,开始轻松的舞蹈,天真
Writing reviews for students is a compulsory course teacher on duty, if writing traditional reviews, very rigid, no intimacy. How to make the reviews vivid? Recently, I wrote some comments for the class of calligraphy students, excerpts as follows: A: like your quiet, like your hard work, more like your studious, so your calligraphy will have Aura, flippant, cadence, like unpredictable, like mercury diarrhea, people puzzled? B: one by one painting, you write is so powerful, so brush in your hand, there is an irresistible charm, Nianzhuan Na points, in the cheerful dance; script seal script, scripture, enjoy it, this art treasures. C: No matter how loudly you are outside, you can always quietly touch the posts without any hurry or impatience. D: cute you, one by one painting of the Chinese nation’s outstanding traditional culture, calligraphy in your pen, began a relaxed dance, naive