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作文评语是语文教师对学生习作一个总结性的评价。如果说,评改是作文教学中的重要一环,那么评语就是这一环节的点睛之笔。一则好的评语,不仅评价、诊断学生习作的优点、不足,提出改进的方法,而且要架起师生沟通的桥梁,实现师生心灵的沟通。但是,传统的作文评语,“只评文不评人,或只重视评价文章而轻视甚至忽视评价作者,其实是一种顾此失彼的评价方式”。这种方式,“往往会造成为评文而评文的现象,缺
Essay writing is a summative evaluation of Chinese teachers’ writing of students. If you say that the assessment is an important part of composition teaching, then the comment is the crowning touch at this stage. A good comment not only evaluates and diagnoses the strengths and weaknesses of student work, but also proposes ways to improve it. Moreover, it is necessary to set up a bridge between teachers and students to achieve the communication between teachers and students. However, the traditional essay reviews, ”only commenting on the essay but not on the essay, or just focusing on the essay and neglecting or even neglecting the essayist is a way to evaluate the situation.“ In this way, ”often results in the phenomenon of essay commenting, missing