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行草杜甫《春夜喜雨》条幅 王晓平(江苏):此作通篇气脉连贯,落笔大胆,章法完整,体现出作者驭笔能力较为熟练。但问题很多,最主要者,入帖不深,随意性太强。通篇观之,下笔熟练而致油滑单调,结体也随性而出,甚欠推敲。如首行“乃”字之走之底、次行“细无声”三字乏味、“云”字过分夸张、末行“花”之通俗等。建议多临帖少创作,多得古人熏染,以戒随意缠绕之弊。
Xiu-Fu Du Fu “Spring Night Xi Yu” banners Wang Xiaoping (Jiangsu): This verse through the pulse of coherence, make a bold pen, the law is complete, reflects the author ability to master pen more skilled. However, many problems, the most important, into the posts is not deep, arbitrary too strong. Throughout the view, under the pen and skilful skilful, knot also with the sexes, very deficient scrutiny. Such as the first line “is ” at the end of the word, sub-line “thin silent ” boring words, “cloud ” the word exaggerated, the last line “flower ” of the popular. Proposed more temporary posts less creative, more ancient people infected with the ring around the pros and cons.