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写作议论文最易患的毛病就是堆砌论据,下面具体谈谈论据使用中的常见病及纠正方法。一无的放矢,脱离或偏离观点许多同学在使用论据进行论证时,不能对症下药,特别不善于区别筛选相关、类同的材料,导致论据与论点脱离或偏离,影响了论证的说服力。譬如要论“粗枝大叶作风的危害”,有位同学列举了这个事例论据:在法国对俄战争中,拿破伦手下的一个青年军官曾向他郑重地提出利用海军作战和组建海军、修理战舰的策论,但拿破伦一意孤行,轻率地
The most common fault in writing discourse is piled up arguments. The following is a detailed discussion of the common diseases and corrective methods that are used. Targeting, detaching from, or deviating from the point of view Many students cannot use the arguments to make a case, and they are not particularly good at differentiating and screening related and similar materials. This leads to arguments and arguments that dissociate or deviate, which affects the persuasiveness of the argument. For example, to discuss the dangers of “a rough idea”, one of the students cited the case argument: During the French-Russian War, a young military officer under Napoleon had solemnly proposed to him the use of naval operations, the formation of naval forces, and the repair of warships. But Napoleon is arbitrarily