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注解一稍具写作经验的人都明白,诗,第一行最难落笔。“跟你打电话时……”是太平常的一个句子,接着,“……我在医院,”也无非交代诗人所在的一个地方。但两句家常话搭在一起,出来的是一种无奈。这样的开头,似乎写诗的人早早地已经准备好,这回要跟听诗的那个人好好儿地聊一些事了。这是老友间常用的一种语调——实诚的,信任的,也必定是私密的。这一行很重要。这一行的声音很低。沈方诗的声音都不高,他从来就不是一个高音的诗人;他最多是一个
Notes A person who has a little writing experience understands that poetry and the first line are the hardest to quit. “When you call ... ” is a common sentence, then, “... I was in the hospital, ” is nothing more than an account of where the poet is. However, two sentences are often put together, out of a helplessness. At the beginning of this, it seems as if the person who wrote the poem was prepared early, and this time he had to talk a little bit to the man who listened to the poem. This is a common tone used by old friends - honest, trust, must also be private. This line is very important. The voice of this line is very low. Shen Fang poetry is not high in voice, he is not a treble poet; he is up to a