不可忽视的“克隆作文”现象

• 作 者: 朱美君 李菁
• 机 构: 浙江奉化市锦屏中心小学,浙江奉化市锦屏中心小学
• 出 处: 中小学作文教学(小学生版)
• 发表日期: 2004年期
• 关键词: 作文课 命题作文 繁荣兴旺 千人 刻画人物 观察生活 独特感受 写作语言 创造才能 立意深刻

一、现象本学年,我们曾以“农贸市场”为题给学生们布置了一篇命题作文,结果我们发现60个小脑袋竟演绎着大体一致的“文章套路”。一是主题集中:都反映农贸市场繁荣兴旺的景象;二是词汇雷同:大伙儿几乎全用上了“琳琅满目、价廉物美、应有尽有”等等;三是结构大同小异。总之,千篇一律,千人一腔,真可谓是“克隆作文”。

First, the phenomenon This school year, we have to “farmers market” as a theme to the students arranged a proposition essay, the results we found that 60 small head actually deduced a generally consistent “article routine.” First, the theme of concentration: reflect the prosperity and prosperity of farmers market scene; Second, the same words: Everybody almost all spent “dazzling, cheap, everything;” Third, the structure is similar. In short, stereotyped, thousands of people a cavity, is indeed a “clone essay.”