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【教材原题】从你近期的作文中选出一篇,认真读一读,自己先看看存在哪些问题。然后4或5人分成一个小组,讨论一下该如何进行修改,确定修改思路。【写作导引】作文修改“三步法”南京市溧水区白马中学徐白生常听到这样一句话:“好作文是改出来的。”诚哉斯言!相传唐宋八大家之一的王安石在写“春风又绿江南岸”一句时,一个“绿”字反复推敲,反复修改,先后从“到”“吹”“过”“来”“驻”等等一直改到“绿”字方止,于是才有了这流传至今的千古名句。我国文学巨
[Original textbook] From your recent essay selected one, read carefully, first look at what problems exist. Then 4 or 5 people divided into a group to discuss how to make changes to determine the revised ideas. [Writing Guidance] Composition Modify “Three Steps ” Xu Baisheng, Lishui District, Nanjing, Baima Middle School often hear such a sentence: “Good essay is changed out. ” Wang Anshi wrote a sentence of “Spring and Green River South Bank”, a “green” word repeated scrutiny, repeated changes, successively from “to ” “blow ” “over ” “” Resident “and so on has been changed to ” Green "only stop, so have this ever-evolving eternity famous. Giant Chinese literature