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I have many friends. But I like Sunny best. He is my good friend.
Sunny is ten years old. He has two small eyes. He is thin and tall. He likes reading picture books, watching TV, and he also likes playing computer games. He doesn’t like English.
We often play on Sunday. He teaches me to play yo-yo. And I help him with his English. We help each other. I believe our friendship will last forever!
511600 广东省佛冈县第一小学五（2）班
指导老师 罗美珍
点评：
这篇文章语言简洁、通畅。看了作者的描述，我们都对Sunny有了一定的了解。作者重点写出了Sunny的一大特点：贪玩！不过正是因为Sunny贪玩，不爱学英语，才有了作者和Sunny之间的互相帮助，使得这份友谊更有意义。
相信大家都有自己的好朋友。他长什么样，喜欢什么，有什么特点？你能用英语描写一下吗？记得要抓住好朋友一两个突出的特点来写哦！
Sunny is ten years old. He has two small eyes. He is thin and tall. He likes reading picture books, watching TV, and he also likes playing computer games. He doesn’t like English.
We often play on Sunday. He teaches me to play yo-yo. And I help him with his English. We help each other. I believe our friendship will last forever!
511600 广东省佛冈县第一小学五（2）班
指导老师 罗美珍
点评：
这篇文章语言简洁、通畅。看了作者的描述，我们都对Sunny有了一定的了解。作者重点写出了Sunny的一大特点：贪玩！不过正是因为Sunny贪玩，不爱学英语，才有了作者和Sunny之间的互相帮助，使得这份友谊更有意义。
相信大家都有自己的好朋友。他长什么样，喜欢什么，有什么特点？你能用英语描写一下吗？记得要抓住好朋友一两个突出的特点来写哦！