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一、成功的案例金秋十月,笔者应邀到桂林市一所中学给初一学生上了两节作文示范课。课前给每位同学都发了一小枝桂花。第一节课:写有关桂花的比喻句师:俗话说:“桂林桂林,桂树成林;桂树开花,香飘万家。”桂花是我们桂林市的市花。今天我们就来赏桂花,写桂花。句子是组成文章的基本单位,好文章都是由一个个好句子构成的,第一节课我们就写写有关桂花的比喻句。请同学们估计一
First, a successful case In the autumn of October, the author was invited to a secondary school in Guilin City to give two students a composition lesson class. Every classmate sent a small piece of sweet-scented osmanthus before class. The first lesson: Writing a metaphor sentence about Osmanthus fragrans: As the saying goes: “Guilin Guilin, Guilin Chenglin; Guishu blossom, Xiang Liu Wan. ” Osmanthus fragrans is our city of Guilin flowers. Today we will visit osmanthus and write osmanthus. Sentences are the basic units for composing articles. Good articles are made up of one good sentence. In the first lesson, we wrote the metaphorical sentence about osmanthus. Please ask the students to estimate