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我爱那“飞流直下三千尺,疑是银河落九天”的望庐山瀑布;我爱那“安能摧眉折腰事权贵,使我不得开心颜”的刚正不阿;我爱那“长风破浪会有时,直挂云帆济沧海”的凌云壮志。(开篇三个排比句增强了文章的气势,引用古诗彰显了文化韵味!“凌云壮志”应改成“鼓励誓言”。)李白先生,是您,用饱含深情的笔绘声绘色的描绘了我所热爱的古诗。读您,是我永不厌倦的课题。(第二人称的运用拉近了读者与作者之间的距离,近距离的欣
I love that “Flying down three thousand feet, suspected Galaxy nine days ” hope Mount Lushan waterfall; I love that “security can destroy the eyebrows, so I can not be happy” just “; I love that ”Wind and waves will sometimes, straight clouds Yunfan sea“ aspiration of the cloud. (The opening sentence of three parallels reinforces the momentum of the article, quoting ancient poems to express the cultural charm!) ”Lingyun Zhuangzhi“ should be changed to ”encourage oath ".) Mr. Li Bai, is you, with full of affectionate pen vivid portrayal I love the ancient poetry. Reading you is my never-ending subject. (The second person’s use narrows the distance between the reader and the author, and the pleasure at short distance