天然去雕饰朴实现芳华——郭风《松坊溪的冬天》一文赏析

• 作 者: 王姣
• 出 处: 小雪花(小学快乐作文)
• 发表日期: 2013年Z1期

【精彩段落】我曾经在松坊村住过好些日子。这是南方的高山地带的一个小山村。四面是山,是树林,是岩石。有两条山涧从东、西两面的山垄里流出来,在村前会合起来,又向南流去。这便是松坊溪。这是一条多么好的溪涧。溪上有一座石桥。溪中有好多大溪石。那溪石多么好看,有的像一群小牛在饮水,有的像两只狮睡在岸边,有的像几只熊正准备走上岸来。溪底有好多鹅卵石。那鹅卵石那么好看,有玛瑙红的,有松青的,有带着白色条纹、彩色斑点的。还有蓝宝石般发亮的鹅卵石。

Wonderful passage I have lived in Songfang village for some days. This is a small mountain village in the southern highlands. Surrounded by mountains, woods, rocks. Two mountain streams flowed from the mountain ridge on both sides of the east and west and joined together in front of the village and flowed southward. This is Songfang Creek. This is a very good stream. There is a stone bridge in the river. There are a lot of Dashi Creek in the river. That stream looks good, some like a herd of calves drinking, some like two lions sleeping on the shore, and some like a few bears are ready to go ashore. There are a lot of pebbles in the bottom of the stream. That pebble so good-looking, with red agate, loose green, with white stripes, color spots. There are also sapphire-like pebbles.