出奇制胜——从一篇好新闻的产生看写作技巧的作用

• 作 者: 张仲彩
• 出 处: 语文教学与研究
• 发表日期: 1983年10期
• 关键词: 江苏盐城 巡线工 一九 年四 安陆县 北京新闻学会 一所 第三天 机会难得 一本

登载在一九八一年四月九日《孝感报》上的小通讯《他、她、她——一个买书、让书的故事》,被评为全国受奖好新闻,省内外有些学校(如江苏盐城的一所小学)把它列为补充教材或阅读教材。研究这篇小通讯的形成过程,似可说明讲究一点新闻的写作技巧大有必要。这里不妨将来稿和见报稿作一比较。来稿的标题是《一套丛书寄深情》,全文如下:

The small newsletter “He, Her, Her - A Story of Buying a Book, Making a Book” published on April 9, 1981 in the Xiaogan News was awarded as a national award-winning good news. Some schools inside and outside the province (such as An elementary school in Yancheng, Jiangsu Province listed it as supplementary textbooks or reading textbooks. Studying the process of the formation of this small newsletter may seem to explain the need for a bit of news writing skills. Here we can compare the future draft with the report. The title of the manuscript is “a series of books sent deep affection”, the full text is as follows: