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升格支点十分作文七分改。一篇原生态作文,总有若干处可以修改提升的地方,但作文的综合升格,不能是乱入花丛,掐到一朵算一朵,必须按部就班,循序渐进。从内容到形式,由整体到局部,逐一检视,然后选择合适的修改升格方法,一一增删调换,力求完善圆满。回家原文呈现小学时回老家,常觉得炊烟是乡村的印章。早晨,东方刚露出鱼肚白,奶奶便起床,给全家人烧早饭。一个案台,一个土灶,一个大锅,一个烟囱,就构成了农村最朴素、最常见的厨房。奶奶提着一捆柴草走进
Upgrading the fulcrum is very much a seven-point change. There is always a place where you can revise and promote some of the original essays. However, the comprehensive promotion of essays cannot be confused into the flowers. If you think of a flower, you must follow the order and gradually. From the content to the form, from the whole to the local, one by one, and then select the appropriate modification of the upgrading method, one by one additions and deletions, and strive to improve the completion. When the original homecoming was returned to her hometown at the elementary school, I often felt that the smoke was the seal of the village. In the morning, when the eastern part of the country was showing whiteness, the grandmother got up and burned breakfast for the whole family. A counter, a soil stove, a cauldron, and a chimney form the simplest and most common kitchen in the countryside. Grandma walks in with a bundle of fireweed